tweaksing todo texts

examples/dfg/proposal/funds.tex

@@ -78,4 +78,4 @@ visit.
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-% LocalWords:  ipower texteuro
+% LocalWords:  ipower texteuro sec;funds:direct oldpart medskip

examples/dfg/proposal/preconditions.tex

@@ -13,17 +13,17 @@
   Only if applicable: Last name, first name of first-time applicant.
 
   If this is your first proposal, reviewers will consider this fact when assessing your
-  pro- posal. Previous proposals for research fellowships, publication funding, travel
+  proposal. Previous proposals for research fellowships, publication funding, travel
-  allow- ances, or funding for scientific networks are not considered first proposals. If
+  allowances, or funding for scientific networks are not considered first proposals. If
   you are submitting a “first-time proposal” and it is part of a joint proposal, please
   note that your independent project must be distinct from the other projects.
 
   If you have already submitted a proposal as an applicant for a research grant and have
-  received a letter informing you of the funding decision, or if you have led an independ-
+  received a letter informing you of the funding decision, or if you have led an
-  ent junior research group or project in a Collaborative Research Centre or Research
+  independent junior research group or project in a Collaborative Research Centre or
-  Unit, you are no longer eligible to submit a “first proposal”. If you have submitted a
+  Research Unit, you are no longer eligible to submit a ``first proposal''. If you have
-  “first-time proposal” and it was rejected, you may resubmit the application, in revised
+  submitted a ``first-time proposal'' and it was rejected, you may resubmit the
-  form, as a first-time proposal for the same project.
+  application, in revised form, as a first-time proposal for the same project.
 \end{todo}
 
 \subsection{Composition of the Project Group}\label{sec:req:group}
@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@
   Researchers with whom you have collaborated scientifically within the past three years
 
   This information will assist the DFG’s Head Office in avoiding potential conflicts of
-  in- terest during the review process.
+  interest during the review process.
 \end{todo}
 
 \subsection{Scientific Equipment}\label{sec:req:equipment}

examples/dfg/proposal/proposal.tex

@@ -93,10 +93,10 @@ Funding proposal XYZ-83282 has been submitted prior to this proposal on related
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-% LocalWords:  kwarc till formalsafe miko gc ipower ipowerlong Antr agen Beitr
+% LocalWords:  kwarc till formalsafe miko gc ipower ipowerlong Antr agen Beitr gcpubs
 
-% LocalWords:  acrolong intellegible kollaboratives koh arenten ussen Proze pcg
+% LocalWords:  acrolong intellegible kollaboratives koh arenten ussen Proze pcg miko,PI
 % LocalWords:  Versionsmanagementsystem textsc unterst utzt konzentieren stex
 % LocalWords:  mechanik workplan thispagestyle newpage Principcal cvpubsmiko pn
 % LocalWords:  ourpubs zusammenfassung printbibliography pubspage ntelligent
-% LocalWords:  iting pnlong
+% LocalWords:  iting pnlong dfgproposal.cls

examples/dfg/proposal/state.tex

@@ -4,20 +4,20 @@
   field in its direct relationship to your project. This description should make clear in
   which context you situate your own research and in what areas you intend to make a
   unique, innovative, promising contribution. This description must be concise and
-  understand- able without referring to additional literature.
+  understandable without referring to additional literature.
 
   For renewal proposals, please report on your previous work. This report should also be
   understandable without referring to additional literature.
 
-  To illustrate and enhance your presentation you may refer to your own and others’ pub-
+  To illustrate and enhance your presentation you may refer to your own and others’
-  lications. Indicate whenever you are referring to other researchers’ work.  Please list
+  publications. Indicate whenever you are referring to other researchers’ work.  Please
-  all cited publications in your bibliography under section 3. This reference list is not
+  list all cited publications in your bibliography under section 3. This reference list is
-  consid- ered your list of publications. Note that reviewers are not required to read any
+  not considered your list of publications. Note that reviewers are not required to read
-  of the works you cite. This also applies to review sessions that are held on site. In
+  any of the works you cite. This also applies to review sessions that are held on
-  this case, manuscripts and publications that provide more information on the progress
+  site. In this case, manuscripts and publications that provide more information on the
-  reports and are published up to the review panel’s meeting may be made available at the
+  progress reports and are published up to the review panel’s meeting may be made
-  meeting to enable reviewers to read through the information. Reviews will be based only
+  available at the meeting to enable reviewers to read through the information. Reviews
-  on the text of the actual proposal.
+  will be based only on the text of the actual proposal.
 \end{todo}
 
 \subsection{List of Project-Related Publications}\label{sec:projpapers}

examples/dfg/proposal/workplan.tex

@@ -46,8 +46,7 @@ funds are needed, and how they will be used, providing details on individual ite
 where applicable.
 
 Please provide a detailed description of the methods that you plan to use in the project:
-What methods are already available? What methods need to be developed? What as-
+What methods are already available? What methods need to be developed? What assistance is needed from outside your own group/institute?
-sistance is needed from outside your own group/institute?
 Please list all cited publications pertaining to the description of your work programme
 in your bibliography under section 3.
 \end{todo}
@@ -208,8 +207,8 @@ published for at least $x$ years at our archive at \url{http://example.org}.
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-% LocalWords:  workplan.tex wplist dfgcount wa mansubsus duratio ipower wpfig
+% LocalWords:  workplan.tex wplist dfgcount wa mansubsus duratio ipower wpfig sec:wawp
 % LocalWords:  ganttchart xscale workplan workarea pdataref dissem workpackage foo
 % LocalWords:  tasklist taskin taskref sdfkj sdflkjsdf sdfsdf sdfsdfd sdfdsf pn
-% LocalWords:  firstobj secondobj pdatacount WAref ednote OBJref pcgRM pcg
+% LocalWords:  firstobj secondobj pdatacount WAref ednote OBJref pcgRM pcg subsubsections
-% LocalWords:  ldots OBJtref workphase
+% LocalWords:  ldots OBJtref workphase secondobj,title DK:LP,Lamport:ladps94,Knuth:ttb84